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托福独立写作举例论证调查研究举例

2014-09-10 16:38| 来源:环球托福

摘要: 环球托福刘彦老师之前说到托福独立写作中举例方式的问题,今天我们一起来欣赏一下其中托福独立写作举例论证之调查研究举例方式的具体例子,以便大家对调查研究或数字的例子有
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环球托福刘彦老师之前说到托福独立写作中举例方式的问题,今天我们一起来欣赏一下其中托福独立写作举例论证之调查研究举例方式的具体例子,以便大家对调查研究或数字的例子有一个更好的了解。

    Asking students to wear school uniforms affects students’ academic performances positively. Only in this way can teenagers concentrate fully on their study. Otherwise, they will be troubled by questions like “what do I wear to school?” “which pair of shoes fit that dress?” A recent survey can back up this point. The Beijing Youth made a study of 2400 students for a period of two years. Despite their genders and religious background, there is one thing in common: most respondents claimed that they spend an average half an hour putting on make-up and choosing clothes before going to school, and their examination score is lower since too much time is wasted.

在这个例子中作者很巧妙的用北京青年报来举例,在某种程度上增强了例子的真实性和可行性,尤其是后边两年内针对2400个学生的调查研究确实让人无法反驳。希望大家在面对托福独立写作举例论证的时候多多练习这种举例方式,使自己的文章在例子上灵活起来。