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托福优秀范文之young people make better decision

2014-06-19 10:03| 来源:环球托福

摘要: 环球教育小编就为考生们带来一篇关于young people make better decision,希望能给考生们一些帮助。
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托福考试中写作是很重要的一部分,每个考生都希望写出更精彩的作文,这就需要同学们在备考时多阅读一些托福写作范文,学习其中的写作思路和结构,这对自身托福写作水平的提高是有帮助的,下面环球教育小编就为考生们带来一篇关于young people make better decision,希望能给考生们一些帮助。
  Topic:
  In the past young people depended on their parents for making decisions. Today, young people are better able to make decisions on their own.
  Example:
  With the development of society,our living habits have been changed greatly.One of the most significant changes is the issue of whom we young people depend on when making a decision. In the past, young people usually depended on their older family members,especially their parents. However, in contemporary society, we young adults tend to make choice on our own. Here are the reasons.
  Admittely, in the past,the ways they acquired information, most of which come from experience, were limited.It was parents who are much more experienced than their children. In this case, they tended to listen to parents’ advise and let them to control determination. As we all know, over the several decades,parents made the decision for their children who they would marry with in China. At that time, girls had no chance to meet the young men with the same age.However,their parents had the permission to know their children’s future partners through various ways.Without doubt, it was a right choice to depend on their parents when making a decision in the past.
  However, we can get access to a great amount of information,which do good to decision making nowadays.Surfing on the internet, chicking on the mouth, news will display on your computer screen within seconds. What’s more, after aducating, we have learnt knowledge in a system way, which enable us to understand oursleves and the world better.All of these, create a good atmophere for us young people to make decision on ourselves. According to a survey conducted by Peking University aiming to find out how students choose their majors, 80 percent of students depend on their own while less than 20% decided by their parents or teachers instead.Most students are independent nowadays.They would listen to their parents, but it is their own who determine the final choice.
  Another important reason is that some of adults’ experience work less effectively on our generation because conditions change rapidly in the information age. In the past, it was less likely for youngsters to move out of our hometowns while we usually move from one place to anothe nowadays. So parents’ idea might not fit our situation any more.Consequently, we prefer to make a descision depend on our own experience.
  In sum, for the reasons I mentioned above, I totally agree that in comtemporary society, we young adults are better able to make choice on our own.
  以上就是环球教育托福频道为您带来的托福写作范文,考生们可以拿做参考,但实战中最好不要完全照搬,托福写作范文只是为考生们做个示范,实战中写作还是要发挥自身的特色。
  考生们可以取其精华,运用在自己的写作中,环球教育小编相信经过一段时间的练习,考生们也能写出范文水平的作文。