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托福综合写作之如何“反驳”

2014-05-16 16:25| 来源:环球托福

摘要: 托福综合写作中听力跟阅读材料呈相反的关系,那么在写作时就会用的各种听力材料是如何反驳阅读内容的句子。因此在种种句型表达中,如何“反驳”的高大上就显得至关重要。
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托福写作task1部分是一个阅读,听力和写作于一体的综合写作题目。广大考生如果想要在这个部分取得高分就必须从阅读、听力和写作三个方面着手,不断提高自己的英语能力。这类题目会先给考生3分钟读一篇文章(大概200字左右),然后听一段关于对此文章的评论,结束后让考生写出150-225字的作文,典型的问法是:Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on point made in the reading。听力结束后,阅读部分会再次出现并保留在电脑屏幕的左半部分,考生便可以开始写作,写作时间为20分钟。

托福综合写作中听力跟阅读材料呈相反的关系,那么在写作时就会用的各种听力材料是如何反驳阅读内容的句子。因此在种种句型表达中,如何“反驳”的高大上就显得至关重要。下面就跟大家分享几组可以提高考生的综合写作的神句。
1. The writer believes...  However, the professor claims ...
其中however可以替换为:On the contrary, by contrast, oppositely, yet, instead等;
2. The reading states... while the listening holds the view that...
其中while可以替换为whilst,whereas等;
3. The text is strongly opposed by the instructor with a new proof.
4. That is why the opinion of the reading is challenged heavily.
其中oppose,challenge可以替换为object,contradict,rebut, refute,reject,contend等;
5. The lecturer departs totally from the opinions of...made in the reading.
其中depart可以替换为disagree, differ,等
6. The lecture is not in agreement with the passage in terms of...
其中in agreement with可以替换为 in accordance with, in compliance with, in conformity to,等。not in agreement with 可以换成 In contradiction with.
7. The lecture revises the idea presented in the text.
8. The professor acknowledges ...stated in the reading but also points out that ...
其中acknowledge可以替换为admit,recognize等;
9. The lecture and the reading passage give contradictory opinions on the topic of...
其中contradictory可以替换为conflicting, inconsistent, incompatible,competing等
10. The passage asserts ...while the lecture provides several counterarguments to this view.

最后,文章终究不是所谓的华丽词汇以及高级句型的堆砌,篇章行文的感觉更为重要。就综合写作而言,听力观点的全面性以及与阅读材料关系的辩证关系阐述的是否清晰也是影响考生得分的关键。最后祝愿大家考出理想的成绩。