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托福TPO写作范文

2014-10-21 13:31| 来源:环球托福

摘要: 上海环球雅思将为大家带来托福TPO独立写作高分范文,参加托福考试的同学可以借鉴一下。
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  环球托福老师为考生带来托福TPO写作范文,参加托福考试的同学可以借鉴一下。更多TPO信息请关注TPO频道。

   高分范文:
There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship. 

People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful etc! Everyone would more or less wish that the person s/he is dealing with, has some of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their importance, however can be very subjective and relative. 

When someone asks him/herself the question “What do I consider to be the most important thing in my relationship?” the answer depends on a lot of factors such as how his/her earlier relationships were. 

After stating that everyone’s opinion can be different about this, for me honesty, in other words, always telling the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship. Opposite of this is inarguably lying and if someone needs to lie, either s/he is hiding something or is afraid of telling me something. 

In any relationship of mine, I would wish that first of all, the person I’m dealing with is honest. Even though s/he thinks that s/he did something wrong that I wouldn’t like, s/he’d better tell me the truth and not lie about it. Later on if I find out about a lie or hear the truth from someone else, that’d be much more unpleasant. In that case how can I ever believe or trust that person again? How can I ever believe that this person has enough confidence in me to forgive him/her and carry on with the relationship from there. So if I cannot trust a person anymore, if the person doesn’t think I can handle the truth, there’s no point to continuing that relationship. 

Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal behavior from people, an instance of the opposite of these behaviors would not upset me as much as dishonesty would. Among all the possible behaviors, dishonesty is the only one for me that terminates how I feel about a person’s reliability. Therefore honesty would be my first concern and the most important consideration in a relationship. 

  托福TPO写作范文:

  作文点评:
  这篇文章中,作者先是列举了几个人际关系中很重要的品格。然后作者又举证说明不诚实或者不情愿会暴露许多不好的行为,很难被他人原谅,也很可能摧毁一段友情。作者的语言很流利,准确,而且明确表达了自己的观点,而且文章句式多变。文章虽然存在一些错误,但是错误都是比较细小的,不影响阅读,所以整篇文章还是能够得到高分。
  
  以上就是环球教育老师为考生带来的托福TPO写作范文,希望对考生能够有所帮助。